I miss you Angel of Music
Posted: Sunday, August 29, 2010
by Elfreda Eriksen
I miss the sweet melody of your voice,
each sound touching my beating heart,
giving life forward rhythmic momentum and meaning.
I miss the harmony of our friendship
when we would share our inner thoughts and
resonating silences, till the next time we spoke.
I miss the colourful tonalities with which you expressed
the many moods of the moment, never knowing
if there would be a sense of happiness, sadness, anger or contentment
in each nuance.
I miss the tempo with which you strove for
"Hey presto" with your intense work ethic.
The driving force behind the wheel.
I miss your dynamic nature,
soft and compelling one moment lulling me into
a false sense of security,
then loud and brash,
shattering my very existence with words
of disdain.
Angel of Music, you guide my hands
upon the keys of life and I respond
with outpouring of sound not of my making,
but of the inner light with which
you guide my path.
I miss you Angel of Music.
You and you alone
can break this dramatic silence, for
a whole note rest feels like a life time of
dissonant torture.
One melodic phrase of your voice
will bring tranquility and peace.
Hi Elfreda. Beautiful poem. "...One melodic phrase of your voice will bring tranquility and peace." You are a talented poet. All the best. Your fan, NenitaThank you so much Nenita, Suzi made a better version of it for me that I will place on searchWarp. This poem was written for someone very important and special to me and I really appreciate your lovely comments as this is a very heartfelt poem. I look forward to reading your work and commenting.Again many thanksElfreda

